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posted on 2004-10-30 at 00:10
Haiku-time!
-dances-
Okay, that was a play on words with "Hammer-time" but..yeah. Anyway..
The title is self explanatory. This thread will be all about Haiku's...I want everyone to give it a shot. You can make it to be serious, or
funny, or just simply disgusting as long as you follow the correct guideline.
A Haiku consists of three verses following this pattern:
5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables
An example of a Haiku would be: I am very hot
shower me with compliments
watch my ego grow
Not only will it help out everyone's inner artist to shine through, but it'll get people posting again, which I think has been the goal
for the last little while.
you won't let me down...
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posted on 2004-10-30 at 00:52
this is a haiku
an extremely bad attempt
can't you see i'm bored?
ta bi
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posted on 2004-10-30 at 02:40
this is a classic from back in the days of school -- written by my good friend mr. dan.
*ahem*
do not drink and drive.
you will kill yourself -- ok?!
play it safe. yeah, yeah.
there are way more where that came from. i don't reckon you lot can handle more than one at once though.
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posted on 2004-10-30 at 02:52
That was great...I want to read more of his work.
Here's my next attempt:
so,was it good,huh?
when you dissected that frog.
you will go to hell
you won't let me down...
Pure_Ibanez_Sound
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posted on 2004-10-30 at 03:05
Oink oink said the pig.
He oinked quite well, so did I.
He still became bacon.
[Edited on 30-10-2004 by Pure_Ibanez_Sound]
one last show.
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posted on 2004-10-30 at 03:26
quotation:Originally posted by Pure_Ibanez_Sound
Oink oink said the pig.
He oinked quite well, so did I.
He still became bacon.
[Edited on 30-10-2004 by Pure_Ibanez_Sound]
that last line is six
you need to make it five
learn to count, okay
so do not get mad
I do not mean to offend
I was just kidding
[Edited on 30/10/04 by Adidas]
"What are you doing?" >.>
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posted on 2004-10-30 at 03:34
quotation:Originally posted by Adidas
quotation:Originally posted by Pure_Ibanez_Sound
Oink oink said the pig.
He oinked quite well, so did I.
He still became bacon.
[Edited on 30-10-2004 by Pure_Ibanez_Sound]
that last line is six
you need to make it five
learn to count, okay
so do not get mad
I do not mean to offend
I was just kidding
W.T.F. Mate?
Rolling On Floor Laughing.
Laughing My Ass Off.
"What are you doing?" >.>
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posted on 2004-10-30 at 04:45
heres one i wrote for an english assignment
Breakdown
underneath my skin
I hid from you a failure
Now I need your love
yaya, its sappy
How do you communicate those emotions that are so intense that no physical expression or series of words can even scratch the surface?
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posted on 2004-10-30 at 06:41
windows 95
i am the blue screen of death
no one hears you scream
Some things take more than a lifetime.
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posted on 2004-10-30 at 16:18
Nice going, Dave.
you suck teh big balls
that is what he said to me
i kicked his ass,man.
you won't let me down...
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posted on 2004-10-30 at 16:57
Yo yo, i have flow.
In the rain or in the snow.
I'm out! Word, yeah yeah.
one last show.
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posted on 2004-10-30 at 17:00
Pshhh... yo,i am so dope.
so fresh and so clean-clean,yo.
don't mess with me,werd.
you won't let me down...
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posted on 2004-10-30 at 21:58
there are some good ones on the latest homestar runner halloween cartoon. go check it out: http://www.homestarrunner.com
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posted on 2004-10-30 at 22:01
Who the hell are you?
Leave me the fuck alone now
You stupid loser
www.bittercandi.com
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posted on 2004-10-30 at 22:14
jeez calm down dagger
no-one even mentioned you
i am quite hungry.
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posted on 2004-10-30 at 22:23
"haiku king i am"
says mr. dobalina.
show me what you got.
you won't let me down...
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posted on 2004-10-30 at 22:42
so you're doubting me?
calling me out isn't safe.
you should know better.
Amid the chaos of that day, when all I could hear was the thunder of gunshots, and all I could smell was the violence in the air, I look back and am
amazed that my thoughts were so clear and true, that three words went through my mind endlessly, repeating themselves like a broken record:
you're so cool, you're so cool, you're so cool. And sometimes Clarence asks me what I would have done if he had died, if that bullet
had been two inches more to the left. To this, I always smile, as if I'm not going to satisfy him with a response. But I always do. I tell him
of how I would want to die, but that the anguish and the want of death would fade like the stars at dawn, and that things would be much as they are
now. Perhaps. Except maybe I wouldn't have named our son Elvis.
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posted on 2004-10-30 at 22:46
Calm down now, children.
PIS is here to help thy out.
I'll eat and destroy.
one last show.
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posted on 2004-10-30 at 22:51
Listen,j-billa
you think you can rock a mic?
I'm calling you out.
you won't let me down...
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posted on 2004-10-31 at 00:00
?
one last show.
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posted on 2004-10-31 at 00:07
Ha, nice haiku PIS
ok, this isn't working. I cant write Haikus
Some things take more than a lifetime.
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posted on 2004-10-31 at 00:54
niiiicee.... but i must say
it doesn't quite work for me
i say P-I-S
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posted on 2004-10-31 at 01:27
indeed, "tremendous",
precisely what sprung to mind
when i read that one
ta bi
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posted on 2004-10-31 at 03:24
Thanks for deleting
That thread. It was so bad. Boo!
I feel so awful.
Yuck.
one last show.
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posted on 2004-10-31 at 03:29
don't nick people's stuff
these last two lines are pointless:
unnecessary.
